Analysis of In Winter



This morning's pavement ice invites
a broken hip as, wrapped up tight
against the gripping wind, I walk

with penguin steps towards the beach,
my dog in tow, to watch the sick
grey waves fold to dishwater foam.

The seaside counts for nothing, now
that summer's lease is spent and fall
has given up the ghost and fled,

just as the ruffled robin, that
pecks at an icy puddle, looks
more at home on the Christmas card

the postman brings, a flash of red
when all is bloodless, cold and dead.


Scheme XXX XXX XXA XXX AA
Poetic Form
Metre 11010101 01011111 01010111 11010101 11011101 111111 0111101 11011101 11010101 11010101 11110101 11110101 01010111 11110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 490
Words 98
Sentences 2
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 2
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 76
Words per stanza (avg) 18

About this poem

I poem about venturing out early on a winter morning. The poem is syllabic. It uses enjambment between the verses. 'Given up the ghost' is a euphemism for dying found in the King James Bible. Ghost is an Old English word for spirit or soul.

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Written on December 27, 2023

Submitted by on December 27, 2023

Modified by on January 11, 2024

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John Roper

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