Analysis of I shy away

Heather Lydia Thornhill 1981 (Manchester)



I feel I have a lot to say
But in my heart I shy away
I see the fields they're calling me
So lush and green too wet to lay
I search myself in others traits
Finding things I no longer need
But walk away with such a greed
As if they'd still planted their seed
I have to look but stare, not I
For surely it could make them cry
Or force some grudge to its dismount
And bring the fury to their eye
Though I swiftly think I cannot lie
I want to ask you who am I
You always seem to reveal me
Eventually hating me
How can I trust humanity
If all I do is shy away


Scheme AABACDDDEEDEEEBBBA
Poetic Form
Metre 11110111 10111101 11011101 11011111 1110101 10111101 11011101 11111011 11111111 11011111 1111111 01010111 111011101 11111111 1111011 01000101 11110100 11111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 554
Words 121
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 431
Words per stanza (avg) 121
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Written on December 27, 2023

Submitted by heathert.34240 on December 27, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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