Analysis of One Ride



Chasing the
stoke
waves growing larger

Weekend
 warriors
still on the beach

Destiny
calling
mortality daring

Odds
go to hell
above twenty feet

Dropping
into
the thunder

The spray
to the
heavens

Darkness
envelops
one prayer to beseech

The sound
of a
monster

The
howl
of its fury

But nowhere
 on earth
—would I rather be

(California Surf: December, 2023)


Scheme AXB XXC DEE XXX EXB XAX XXC XAB AXD XXD B
Poetic Form
Metre 100 1 11010 1 100 1101 100 10 010010 1 111 01101 10 01 010 01 10 10 10 010 11101 01 10 10 0 1 1110 11 11 11101 0101010
Characters 373
Words 78
Sentences 1
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 1
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 9
Words per line (avg) 2
Letters per stanza (avg) 26
Words per stanza (avg) 5
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on December 30, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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