Analysis of Ngiphilela ini!

Thembi Ndlovu 1994 (Johannesburg South)



Kungani kwamele ngiphile?
Kungani ungigcinile emhlabeni?
Kungani ungathathi umphefumulo wam?
Ngiphilelani nje!

Ungiphiliselani?
Ungigcineleni?
Ungibekeleni?
Ngisaphilelani kodwa?

Kungani ngiphilela ezimathonsi?
Kungani ngiphilela ubunzima bomhlaba?
Kungani kungena zwelo kimi na?
Ngibulele bani, ngijeza nje?

Izinkinga zomhlaba ngiphila nazo mhla.
Akukho ukuphumula emoyeni wami.
Kumapheketwana konke emphilweni wami
Kanti yisiphi isono sami kule zwe?

Thatha umoya wami enyameni!
Thatha lo mphefumulo senganele!
Kuyefana ngoba ngiyafana nongasekho.
Kungani ngingazumeki ngishiye lomhlaba?
Ngiphilelani na!?


Scheme ABCD BBBE XFBD ACCE BAXFB
Poetic Form
Metre 111 111 1111 11 1 1 1 11 111 1111 11111 1111 11111 1111 1111 1111011 1111 1111 1111 1111 11
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 610
Words 93
Sentences 20
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 5
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 103
Words per stanza (avg) 14

About this poem

The pain of trying so hard to make something out of life but it keeps dragging down Lost all the hopeless in the world

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Written on December 10, 2023

Submitted by Thembilady23 on December 16, 2023

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