Analysis of -To Nim'a Abdiselam.



                    (to  N.A.H)

i see it all over and with you,
all i ever need and want, love so true;

i see it in your eyes all aflame-
looking at you, inside I cannot remain
                the same;

maybe minds, Dearest, but hearts
                know not how to lie,
and so, Beloved, so revered, I just
               wouldn't talk by

to My heart's Beloved, not to you,
i know language of heart is true, sweet,
               holy and so true--

let's rejoice that we finally found one
               another;
for you and me, Dearest, there's no
               other.
                      -by Hakim KASSIM.
                       (-d. July 19, 2023)


Scheme X AA BXB XCXC AXA XDXDBC
Poetic Form
Metre 11 111110011 1110101111 111011101 10110111001 01 1011011 11111 010110111 1011 11101111 111011111 10011 1011110011 010 11011011 10 1011 11
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 676
Words 120
Sentences 7
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 2, 3, 4, 3, 6
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 61
Words per stanza (avg) 17

About this poem

The poet casually comes to meet a girl who nonetheless turns out to cut, befit, and accommodate every inch if his soul and psyche--thus praising the incidental meeting with her, while insisting that they stay together hence.

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Written on July 19, 2023

Submitted by hakimk.71556 on December 23, 2023

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John Rapport

Born in Mogadishu, Somalia, the poet was raised in a politically prominent family; yet in his early teens, the poet and his family emigrated to the United States, where the poet lived for nearly two decades. Kassim started writing and publishing poetry while in junior college, at a relatively young age, and almost spontaneously fell with poets and poems, and has so been ever since; particularly the Romantic poets--William Wordsworth, George Gordon, Lord Byron, John Keats and Percy Shelley--drew his attention and engaged hìs intellect, so much so that, to this day, they represent more or less 'the epitome' of what Poesy means to him.The poet now lives in his land of birth and works as a freelance journalist and writer. Kassim is currently preparing manuscript of what he hopes to be his first book of poetry; the poet feels a particular attachment to John Keats and Percy Shelley for their vehement opposition to the inhumane effects on ordinary people such as the consequences of industrial development in their lifetimes–and reminds us that technological progress today does the same: ‘Weep, for the world is wrong!’ (emphasis supplied) (Percy Shelley, “Dirge”) more…

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