Analysis of The Photograph



Five orbits around the sun,
and the depth of my concern bewilders me…
It grabs at my heart with long, digging fingers.
I hoped it would abate; but I knew better.
We have passed the years through separate tunnels of time,
yet here I sit -
still caring more than I should.
But for the photograph- might I have forgotten your face?


Scheme ABCDEFGH
Poetic Form
Metre 1100101 00111010101 11111111010 11110111110 111011101011 1111 1101111 1101011101011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 353
Words 72
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 256
Words per stanza (avg) 62

About this poem

Sometimes even many years and many miles can’t dull feelings we have for others.

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Written on January 10, 2024

Submitted by susan.brumel on January 15, 2024

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Susan Mayer Brumel

I am a retired hospice social worker, who began writing poems about 2 years ago. I am married, a mom of two sons, a Bernese Mountain Dog, and grandma of two grandchildren who are the loves of my life. A lover of all animals and most people, I enjoy spending time in nature, long walks, and reading Pablo Neruda, Blake, William Carlos Williams, James Joyce, Mary Oliver, Emily Dickinson, Maya Angelou, Leonard Cohen, and more. Baudelaire tells us to ‘be drunk’ on something every day; I am drunk on poetry and intend never to be sober! more…

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