Analysis of A Picture on the Wall

James Vincient Johnson 1952 (Algoma WV)



A Picture on the Wall

I stared at this marvelous picture on the wall
It appeared to stare at me just to say
I am still here and watching over you all
Without a sound, I knew it was this way

The picture was a special one and only one
It knew how much value it was to me always
It cherished every minute of life it gave
Without a slight comment in those days

I wish only to see what it has seen
On the other side in his heavenly dream
I am sure he will never forget my love
And I will never forget his unheard scream

He just wanted to tell me goodbye
Now I sit and often cry
I miss you, son
I love you, son
Between us, you are alive and did not die


Scheme A ABAB CDXD XEXE FFCCF
Poetic Form
Metre 010101 111110010101 1011111111 11110101011 0101111111 010101010101 11111011111 110100101111 010110011 1110111111 10101011001 11111100111 01110011011 11101111 1110101 1111 1111 01111010111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 651
Words 144
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 5
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 101
Words per stanza (avg) 28

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Remembrance of my son.

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