Analysis of Square-Shaped Moon
Resmar Jude Bayotas 1991 (Ilo-Ilo)
Lava only meets the ocean
When a volcano kisses the sky
The three hundred overthrown a thousand
Til Leonidas got killed and die
The sun and moon held hands for a while
After being apart for some million miles
Like a love beyond possible
between us two
and I know it is impossible
for me to unlove you.
Only God can move mountains and divide seas into two,
But I can climb a mountain just to be with you
I know these words are simple and shallow
and does not mean anything to you
Damn that Cupid's arrow
It hit me deeply, but not you...
I wish these feelings turns to dust
Just like when Thanos does the snap!
A spell forbidden to cast
My love will turn to scratch
Sometimes reality tells a lie
When the heart will hide the truth
That I can only embrace, kiss, and love you
Under a square-shaped moon.
| Scheme | XAXA XXBCBC CCDCDC XXXX AXCX |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 10101010 100101001 011001010 111101 010111101 10100111101 10101100 0111 011110100 11111 10111100011011 111101011111 1111110010 01111011 11110 11110111 11110111 11110101 0110011 111111 0110101 1011101 11110011011 100111 |
| Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
| Characters | 833 |
| Words | 185 |
| Sentences | 5 |
| Stanzas | 5 |
| Stanza Lengths | 4, 6, 6, 4, 4 |
| Lines Amount | 24 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 26 |
| Words per line (avg) | 6 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 127 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 31 |
About this poem
This poem is about a forbidden and unrequited love I have for s special woman. Though we are not meant for each other, I can't deny that I can't unloved her. All I can do is to love her from afar. I can't deny the fact that I am longing to be with her and hoping that the universe aligns, and she choose me to be the man of her life. Maybe I will only stop loving her, until she meet the better person than me.
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