Analysis of I shared my love



I shared my heart but it's beat began to waver
Your sweet embrace was all I could favour
I shared my love for my words were too small
I'd written on your hand, in a book, on a wall
So I wrote in the sky 'Will you marry me' before I fall
It wasn't enough so I wrote in my eyes
With primrose pettles reflecting such lies
Because it wasn't enough for your soft cries
So the angels shone my message through the stars
From here to jupiter and back through mars
Interlacing it with dimensions and swirls of galactic roses and oceanic pearls
It wasn't enough so I wrote it in prayer to the God of life who was somewhere out there
And he wrote us a child into our world and said your creation my prescious is in here.


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Poetic Form
Metre 111111101110 110111111 1111111011 110111001101 111001111010111 11001111011 11101011 01110011111 10101110101 1111000111 1110100110101000101 110011111011011111111 0111010110101101011101
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 711
Words 142
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 13
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 43
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 559
Words per stanza (avg) 141
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Written on January 17, 2024

Submitted by heathert.34240 on January 17, 2024

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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