Analysis of It's not just a dream

Richard J Edwards 1960 (Ft Belvoir)



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It's not just a dream.

Screaming from the depth of my heart and soul for the beauty of this land that God made for us. My elation I cannot hold back for this is among the many ways God has shown us that he loves us. Throughout the course of life many spirits of many lives that have dreamed this beauty to life live within the landscapes and soil of the oceans Forrest high cliffs with the giant redwoods peering down into the pacific ocean and thriving themselves longing to be where the waves meet the shore. The view in itself have contributed to the redwoods desire to grow huge in hopes of one day being large enough to bend over and kiss the shore. I can't scream it enough how much magic from all the lives have seen these beautiful landscapes. These visions have been burnt into their minds for them to recall at a later date and when they do they are lifted up to the sky beyond the grip of the clouds and its living this magic all over again.


Scheme XX X
Poetic Form Quinzaine  (33%)
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Characters 966
Words 186
Sentences 7
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 2, 1
Lines Amount 3
Letters per line (avg) 258
Words per line (avg) 61
Letters per stanza (avg) 387
Words per stanza (avg) 92
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Written on January 20, 2024

Submitted by rjenavy on January 20, 2024

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Richard J Edwards

Retired Navy. Live in Montana. And Love God. In 2004 I wrote and had published by poetry. Com The Truth Of Heart and Soul put in their book "Involving the Muse". This is not my best work. I have 40yrs of writings I know R publish worthy I'm just looking for some to help that knows how to do that. I'm a common man and I believe my writings R easily relatable. more…

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