Analysis of Twilight of Life



Remember your Creator,
From those days back in your youth;
Back when the vitiator,
The evil days were uncouth.

The years draw near that you say,
You have no pleasure in them;
A time you no longer stray,
Fearful that God would condemn.

When the sun would not grow dark,
As well as the moon and stars;
And when the clouds would embark,
After the rain would leave scars.

When the keepers of the house,
Tremble as strong men are bent;
Grinders cease while the spouse,
Windows are dimmed from light sent.

The doors on the street are shut,
The sound of grinding is low;
Daughters were stuck in a rut,
They had sung songs that were slow.

Rise to the sound of a bird,
Fearing not of what is high;
To desires of the Word,
The eternal home is nigh.

Mourners go about the street.
As the dust returns to earth;
As the Lord is there to greet,
The spirit in a new birth.

Copyright © 2024 Richard Newton Sherrer


Scheme ABAB CDCD EFEF GHGH IJIJ KLKL MNMN A
Poetic Form
Metre 0101010 1111011 1101 0101011 0111111 1111001 0111101 1011101 1011111 1110101 0101101 1001111 1010101 1011111 101101 1011111 0110111 0111011 1001001 1111101 1101101 1011111 1010101 0010111 1010101 1010111 1011111 0100011 10101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 904
Words 206
Sentences 9
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 87
Words per stanza (avg) 21

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Remember Your Creator in Your Youth Ecclesiastes 12:1-8

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Submitted by richardnsherrer on January 29, 2024

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Richard Newton Sherrer

I was born and raised on a farm in Pennsylvania. It was a small family farm that was handed down through 8 generations of Sherrer men until my father; Newton just could not make a living from it any longer. He thought that I would make a better living away from the farm. So, I decided to join the Air Force in 1969 upon graduating from high school. I gained quite a bit of experience and insight on life while in the service. Even though I was only stationed on the east coast of the US, my Air Force career took me to Germany and Korea. After 20 years wearing of the blue uniform, I decided going in a different direction and found myself becoming very diverse in many different fields. Something still seemed missing to me after being separated from the service for about 10 years. The Air Force was a way of life for me, but really missed life in Korea. I found myself changing careers again. Poetry was an interest of his since my days in high school. With returning to the Lord, I felt motivated to write of my Christian beliefs. I started looking at Bible verses and reflecting on my own personal experiences. The Bible was found to be as true today as to when the various books were written. I could see much of what the Bible is teaching us as valid as every in modern time. It felt only natural to me on using his personal experience based on Bible verses and see much of my own life written in the Scriptures. God inspires me what to write about though. I do not claim to be an expert on God or the Bible. I am just a Christian who has become enlightened to write poetic verses from the Holy Scriptures. more…

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