Analysis of Feeling the Heat



Cicadas screech the sound of summer,
signalling a long, hot day ahead.
Shall I find some shade?
Know I’ll find a good book.
Or …
better still –
write some poetry.

How I love to lounge in nature’s shade,
under weeping willow's sweeping loft.
Shall I lie and dream?
I’d surely fall asleep.
But …
better still –
write some poetry.

The songsters’ chorus joins cicadas.’
All wonder how long I’ll play squatter.
Shall I defy them,
and leave them to their peace?
No …
better still –
write some poetry.

Too soon, noon’s heat rays find and stab me.
Stingrays ampullae of Lorenzini –
a million sensors
sensing my discomfort.
So …
better not –
write some poetry.
© Jan 25      


Scheme axbxxCD bxxxxCD xaxxeCD ddxxexDx
Poetic Form
Metre 010101110 100011101 11111 111011 1 101 11100 111110101 10101101 11101 110101 1 101 11100 01101010 110111110 11011 011111 1 101 11100 111111011 1110010 01010 101010 1 101 11100 1
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 702
Words 143
Sentences 16
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 7, 7, 7, 8
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 125
Words per stanza (avg) 31

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A simple ditty written in seconds when I was very hot last week.

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Submitted by susannaelliott on February 02, 2024

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Susanna Elliott-Newth

Susanna is a teacher, living near the coastal fringes of the Illawarra Coastline in NSW, Australia. Her environment is her stimulus for her writing. She has published four books of short stories, as well as her own memoir book, and writes educational resources for teachers. more…

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