Analysis of My World



My World
My world is dark
The sky is Grey
It's almost raining everyday

There is no sun
I have no fun
Sometimes I feel the need to run

I feel alone
I'm on my own
None of my feelings are ever shown

It's a shame
I'm always blamed
No one will ever help the pain

My world is dark
The sky is Grey
I hope it doesn't rain today


Scheme xABb ccc ddd xxx ABb
Poetic Form
Metre 11 1111 0111 1110101 1111 1111 01110111 1101 1111 111101101 101 111 11110101 1111 0111 11110101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 328
Words 78
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 49
Words per stanza (avg) 14

About this poem

Back in 2008 I entered poetry.com and won an Editor's Choice award. An award presented by howard Ely. His books are now on Amazon and at Walmart. I was in shock when the site was bought and had to go through all the hassle of thinking I didn't matter.

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Written on January 01, 2008

Submitted by jmell1987 on January 21, 2024

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