Analysis of Time’s Comedic Architect



Time’s Comedic Architect

The vision in the mirror illustrates
reflections of an aging woman’s face
Gnarled lines enshrine
the many years embraced
But starlight in her eyes still radiates

The lips are pale and drawn a little thin
The teeth once bright have grown
a wee bit dim
The jawline softly hangs with sleepy skin
But faithfully, her beauty glows within

The thickened neck still holds the head erect
The arms and hands are weak,
with frail effect
The breasts no longer plump, profiles detect
But she laughs at time’s comedic architect

The dimpled belly sits a little round
Upon the hips more padding can be found
Downy wisps grow scanty on the mound
But longings deep within her still abound

Once shapely legs have lost their sex appeal
Swollen knees makes it difficult to kneel
The ankle bones more often are concealed
But her feet yet strong,
still walk her through the weald

The aging woman’s changing self belies,
grays and wrinkles
that are but the years’ disguise
Brilliance emanates yet,
from her thoughtful eyes
And her brave and youthful spirit still abides


Scheme A BXXXB CXXCC AXAAA DDDD EEXXA FXFXFX
Poetic Form
Metre 101010 010001010 010111011 1101 010101 11001110 0111010101 011111 0111 011011101 1100010101 0101110101 010111 1101 011101101 1111101010 0101010101 0101110111 101110101 1101010101 1101111101 1011110011 0101110101 10111 110101 010110101 1010 1110101 101001 10101 00101010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,095
Words 201
Sentences 1
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 1, 5, 5, 5, 4, 5, 6
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 125
Words per stanza (avg) 26

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Written on January 05, 2024

Submitted by susan.brumel on January 13, 2024

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Susan Mayer Brumel

I am a retired hospice social worker, who began writing poems about 2 years ago. I am married, a mom of two sons, a Bernese Mountain Dog, and grandma of two grandchildren who are the loves of my life. A lover of all animals and most people, I enjoy spending time in nature, long walks, and reading Pablo Neruda, Blake, William Carlos Williams, James Joyce, Mary Oliver, Emily Dickinson, Maya Angelou, Leonard Cohen, and more. Baudelaire tells us to ‘be drunk’ on something every day; I am drunk on poetry and intend never to be sober! more…

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