Analysis of Wake and Rage

Janet Muirhead HIll 1942 (Colorado)



She came to me softly in a dream
clothed in light and beauty
She spoke in quiet wonderment
and called me to my duty,

Come forth from darkness; rule the day
Why do you hide your head
It’s time to wake, throw off despair
and refute the things they’ve said.

You do not speak truth by repeating lies
that say you have no worth.
It’s time to trust in who you are.
Rise up and walk the earth.

It’s time to rage at those who say
you have no earthly power.
Your time has come to speak your truth.
This is your waking hour.


Scheme XAXA BCXC XDXD BEXE
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 111110001 101010 11010100 0111110 11110101 111111 11111101 0010111 1111110101 111111 11110111 110101 11111111 1111010 11111111 1111010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 530
Words 114
Sentences 8
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 99
Words per stanza (avg) 26

About this poem

This began as a 5 minute freeform writing in response to a prompt. Since then, after some edits, I think of it as overcoming brainwashing that keeps us compliant rather than thinking for ourselves.

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Written on January 19, 2024

Submitted by janet_1 on January 19, 2024

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Janet Muirhead HIll

Janet Muirhead Hill is a novelist who occasionally writes poetry for fun and for self-expression. Her published books include the Miranda and Starlight series of horse stories for middle-grade readers and other fiction. more…

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