Analysis of Dear Child

Jonathan Conway 2009 (Greenville, OH)



By Joe Dusek

How long will I sit in mourning dark
I wait evermore for morning lark
I’m misunderstood I’m feared in vain
While none, even me ,know if I’m sane
I pray for the day I can walk the streets
Without hearing screams and running feets
I long to escape this wretched place
To look on the sun and see her face
For even in my sleep
I weep
For anythings gone when it passes these gates
Oh, curse the fear that my name begates
A prisoner in this dark domaine
Where all my tears are cried in vain
So I plead once more, no I won't wait. Nome!
I beg dear child, Will you take me home?
(original end)
In the sunlights where I long to roam
To walk on springy turf and loam
Alas trapped in these darkened chambers
Where all I “Know” revealed as strangers
And who am I to face the danger
I’m no hero, mage, or ranger
For if I seek hope I face the risk
Of being robbed and human “Tisk”
But is this life a life worth living?
With no one to greet with giving?
Well heroes aren't born they're made
So from this challenge I will not fade
In search of hope I leave this place
And when danger comes I can’t slow my pace


Scheme A BBCCDDEEFFXDCCGGXGGHHIIXAJJKKEE
Poetic Form
Metre 1110 111110101 11101101 10011101 111011111 1110111101 011010101 111011101 111010101 110011 11 111111011 11011111 010001101 11111101 1111111111 111111111 01001 00111111 1111101 011011010 111101110 011111010 11101110 111111101 11010101 111101110 11111110 11010111 111101111 01111111 0110111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,145
Words 239
Sentences 6
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 31
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 429
Words per stanza (avg) 112

About this poem

Inspired by the character Boo Radley from "How to Kill a Mockingbird". This poem was originally created by Joseph Dusek.

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Written on February 09, 2024

Submitted by conwayjonathan09 on February 09, 2024

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Jonathan Conway

I am a Junior High amateur poet who specializes in melodramatic melancholy poems. Poetry is my passion and it's what I love doing. more…

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