Analysis of We Touched, We Kissed



Two orbits aligning,
Through strife and through pain.
Our lips, then our hands,
Were never estranged.

Though only a few moments
With just one more night,
We knew that our touch
Would survive such a slight.

Some things aren’t forever,
Some things never change.
This hunger, this thirst,
Can never arrange.

We took our few moments,
With passion and calm.
As bodies did merge,
We did find a balm.

Whatever will happen,
What could come next.
The greatest joy
is not in this text.


Scheme XXXX ABXB XCXC ADXD XEXE
Poetic Form Quatrain  (80%)
Etheree  (35%)
Tetractys  (30%)
Metre 110010 11011 1011101 01001 1100110 11111 111101 101101 1110010 11101 11011 11001 1110110 11001 11011 11101 10110 1111 0101 11011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 481
Words 104
Sentences 9
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 74
Words per stanza (avg) 17
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Written on February 03, 2024

Submitted by JaredKairel on February 10, 2024

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