Analysis of I did, I didnt.
The thought of being were I am vs were I would be
what a life to prove schizophrenia doesnt define me.
A living hell, nobody wants to admit or endure,
A diagnosis people will run from I am quite damn sure.
A purpose in life that was pushed far away each day.
A women's future yet so tainted with unforgiven delay,
A love of herself that grew broken, no longer strong.
A life that was torn apart, and done so wickedly wrong.
Throughout years, she bottled it and carried herself.
Destruction and deception, declined her mental health.
An earth angel, with already her plate so full,
She settled, but was thrown a different kind of life roll.
This girl that was once so strong and alive.
Became a mother of four, with the utmost drive
She did what what she could, no matter who seen,
But she never was good for the mother they deemed.
There has been so many mistakes, and bridges burned.
In between the lines, she lied but she learned,
She tried to get everyone's attention, but failed.
She tried to explain, her answers so raw, and detailed.
Revolving doors, broken promises, and distance
She blamed herself, losing all forms of resistance.
She was left without anyone hearing her side,
The people that once loved her, shut her out and lied.
She was stubborn but always first to forgive.
She set boundaries and rerouted a new path to live.
She broke through the damage, with no-one in sight,
She prayed, this time for her kids to know her fight.
Some things she won't ever be able to explain,
How hard she fought, the battles she faced.
Its hard when your the real victim in the story,
But others are out there justifying their glory.
Jodi K Bisio
Scheme | AABB CCDD XXXX EEXX FFGG HHII XEJJ XXAA X |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 01110011100111 1011101001011 010111101101 00101011111111 0100111110111 010101110101001 0110111101101 01111010111001 011110101001 0100010010101 111010100111 11011101001111 1111111001 01010111011 11111111011 111011101011 111110010101 0010111111 11111001011 1110101011001 010110100010 110110111010 11101101001 010111010101 1110111101 11100001001111 11101011101 11111011101 111110110101 111101011 111101100010 110111100110 1011 |
Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 1,655 |
Words | 337 |
Sentences | 21 |
Stanzas | 9 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1 |
Lines Amount | 33 |
Letters per line (avg) | 39 |
Words per line (avg) | 9 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 144 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 33 |
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My life in a nutshell
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