Analysis of From The Coal Mine



From The Coal Mine …

Liars …
 early prophets
 of impending doom

(The New Room: February, 2024)

The Moment Shared

We often forget
wrapped up
in our own drama
— that everyone feels the same

(Dreamsleep: February, 2024)

The purpose of war
is peace
The guarantor of peace
— is war

(Dreamsleep: February, 2024)

Moss
hides the message
Whose altar
ascends
In joy’s
adulation
The pilgrimage
— ends

(1st Book Of Prayers: February, 2024)

I Bequeath Thee …

Birthing a memory
 o’er future and past
To carry my words
inside others to last

Birthing a memory
o’er time and space
To those still unborn
— my welcoming grace

(Dreamsleep: February, 2024)

Incinerate
all kindling that burns
Articulate
the knowledge that yearns
Reciprocate
before it’s your turn
Elucidate
— each lesson hard earned

(The New Room: February, 2024)

Good health is loaned
— but never owned

(Deamsleep: February, 2024)


Scheme x xxx A x xxxx A bccb A xdxexxde a a Afxf Agxg A hihihxhx A jj a
Poetic Form
Metre 1011 10 1010 10101 011100 0101 11001 11 010110 110101 1100 01011 11 00111 11 1100 1 1010 110 01 01 010 0100 1 1111100 1011 100100 11001 11011 011011 100100 1101 11111 11001 1100 010 11011 010 01011 010 01111 010 11011 011100 1111 1101 1100
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 982
Words 189
Sentences 1
Stanzas 18
Stanza Lengths 1, 3, 1, 1, 4, 1, 4, 1, 8, 1, 1, 4, 4, 1, 8, 1, 2, 1
Lines Amount 47
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 38
Words per stanza (avg) 8
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on February 22, 2024

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