Analysis of Thinkful Wishing



“Age but a number”
if only that were true
Yesterday reborn again
— memories renewed

(Dreamsleep: February, 2024)

Moments Beyond Time

In search of fresh meat
the future will come
Hour predestined
the hunt zero sum

As seconds approach
impending attack
Free every moment
—time dead in its tracks

(The New Room: February, 2024)

Why isn’t God
transcending
my doubt
Each day more distant
the louder
I shout
Why can’t the Lord
 acknowledge
my pain
The light
growing dimmer
— the more I proclaim

(Dreamsleep: February, 2024)


Scheme axxx B x xcxc xxdx b xxedaexxxxax B
Poetic Form
Metre 11010 110101 101101 10001 1100 10011 01111 01011 1010 01101 11001 01001 110010 11011 011100 111 010 11 11110 010 11 1101 010 11 01 1010 01101 1100
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 567
Words 105
Sentences 1
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 1, 1, 4, 4, 1, 12, 1
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 51
Words per stanza (avg) 11
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on February 29, 2024

Modified by KurtPhilipBehm on February 29, 2024

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