Analysis of Cold Rain

Julius Hill 2006 (California)



Rain is falling down
Person standing in cold rain
Person goes inside


Scheme ABC
Poetic Form Haiku 
Tercet 
Metre 11101 1010011 10101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 68
Words 12
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 3
Lines Amount 3
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 57
Words per stanza (avg) 12

About this poem

My first Haiku of just a moment in time where I was standing in the cold rain with no thoughts really just admiring the beautiful and yet cold night. Any tips would help I'm interested in learning to write short poems like these more.

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Written on March 04, 2024

Submitted on March 04, 2024

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Julius Hill

Julius Hill 17 year old highschool student interested in Haiku first learned of it from a video game I was already interested in regular poems I wrote a few my self for school projects or just when I felt like explaining my feelings that way. Very new to this type of poetry and would love to learn more. more…

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