Analysis of IF
mad hippie poet 1974 (new jersey)
If you stand in one place for too long, you may drown. If you walk too long, are you walking to get somewhere? Are you truly listening to every sound that runs against sound? Do you hear the birds cry and the angels sing when you are born? You have nothing in this life, but your naked body and some may say that you leave the same way.
Tonight, I will not sleep; my thoughts are getting like the seven seas, way too deep. Too many glistens are lingering inside my head. Am I living, or am I at last dead?
Only if there were enough dreams to dream into a reality that I know that there is no hate or fear, only love hidden in the beauty of nature, only if I can embrace the creature that I know still exists after a million years.
The weather continues to remain cold, unable to give me the answers that I know in this lifetime I was sent and meant to hold
To look inside of the mirror after all these years to be able to see the same face as I did as a little boy, the face that held so much innocence and the look of amazement on every Christmas day
Inside of silence awaits a story; look inside the eyes of the universe or the cursing of the drunk man sitting on the bar stool night and day, for you will see both their souls.
No words need to be spoken when staring at the face of two lovers worlds apart. It is a matter of the heart without any judgment.
I am older now, looking inside of the mirror that I did as a young child, and the image is speaking to me, saying if only you would rest, maybe then, only then can you be released.
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Metre | 1110111111111111111101111110100110011101111101100101111111100111110100111111011 01111111110101011111101110001111110111111 10110011110101011111111111011000101101011101010111101100101 01001010110101110101110111110111 11011010101111110110111111010101111110000110101100101 0111001010101011010101010111010111011111111 1111110110101111010111010101011010 111011001101011110110010110111011011110110111101 |
Characters | 1,548 |
Words | 322 |
Sentences | 13 |
Stanzas | 8 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1 |
Lines Amount | 8 |
Letters per line (avg) | 150 |
Words per line (avg) | 39 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 150 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 39 |
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