Analysis of They Just Might Die Tomorrow (Bussokusekika)

Edwin Tanguma 1966 (CA)



I was disheartened
When I went to Las Pulgas
There was no E Club
My fellow brother’s in arms
Have the right to blow off steam
They just might die tomorrow

Edwin Tanguma   Aka   Dagesh   3/8/2024


Scheme XAXAXX X
Poetic Form
Metre 11010 111111 11111 1101001 1011111 111101 10010101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 199
Words 39
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 6, 1
Lines Amount 7
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 75
Words per stanza (avg) 21

About this poem

I spoke with some current Marines on my visit…One spoke of 5/11 and I asked another one about the E Club…He told me there was/is one on 29 Palms…I guess 3/11 took it with them…I have fond memories of the E Club on Oogatraz…I wonder if June still has the poems Ron penned for her???Music By June is what she went by when she visited us on Las Pulgas…And I did not write those poems for her…

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Written on March 08, 2024

Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on March 08, 2024

Modified by EdwinRayTanguma on March 08, 2024

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