Analysis of Dismembered

Robert loughran 1962 (Ireland)



She dismembered me with words,

mine not hers,

left me swimming in my own mortification.

She opened the door, said not here, no more,

and returned me for reeducation.

To insecure,not remotely mature, living a life of imitation.

I was younger,it was true ,what is one to do?

So i spent six months  on my playstation.


Scheme X X A X A A X A
Poetic Form
Metre 1010111 110 11100111 1100111111 00111000 110100110011010 1111111111 111111110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 321
Words 72
Sentences 5
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 31
Words per stanza (avg) 7

About this poem

About growing up

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Written on March 10, 2024

Submitted by robertl.92681 on March 10, 2024

Modified by robertl.92681 on March 10, 2024

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