Analysis of No one I remember
Jodi Kristen Bisio 1989 (Alberta)
The thought of being were I am now
a life I had to prove to my family somehow
a girl that dreamed of everything going right
till she found that evil rooting beside her that night
A future that was not yet painted
a young girls future yet so tainted
a love of herself that grew so strong
a life that was torn apart, and done so wrong
Throughout years in struggle, she carried herself
torture and anger, equaled a loss of mental health
an important soul, with already her plate soo full,
she settled, but was thrown a different roll
This girl that was once so strong and alive
became a mother, with hope and trying to survive
she did what any mother would have done
leaving the man, in hi eyes, already had won.
There has been so many mistakes, and bridges burned
In between the lines, she lied but she's learned
she tries to get everyone's attention, but has failed
she tries to explain, her answers so raw, and detailed
revolving doors, spinning forever without a halt
I blame me, no one else, my own worst enemy at fault
I was left without anyone hearing my side
the people that once loved me, shut me out and lied
The girl that was always quick to forgive
took a chance at boundaries and began to live
she struggled through her own demons still at night
but whatever will happen happens, forget who's right
Scheme | AABB XXCC XXXX DDEE FFGG HHII XDBB |
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Poetic Form | Quatrain (57%) |
Metre | 011100111 011111111001 0111110101 1111101001011 010111110 011101110 011011111 01111010111 01101011001 1001010011101 1010110100111 11011101001 1111111001 0101011010101 1111010111 100101101011 111110010101 0010111111 111110010111 1110101011001 0101100100101 11111111110011 11101101011 010111111101 011111101 101110000111 11010110111 110110100111 |
Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 1,319 |
Words | 255 |
Sentences | 2 |
Stanzas | 7 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
Lines Amount | 28 |
Letters per line (avg) | 37 |
Words per line (avg) | 9 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 149 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 35 |
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Written exactly how I would explain, raw and real.
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