Analysis of Creating

Robert loughran 1962 (Ireland)



Watch every moment,
Watch thoughts as they arise.
See the nature of creation.
Walk this world with open eyes.

Watch the very movement,
as thought and motive merge.
Watch the  silent empty space,
 from which all things emerge.

Understand all creation ,
happens only now,
Understand this in interaction,
don't chase for why or how.

Are we at end creators
gifted with a blessing and a curse.
To make each moment better,
or to make each moment worse.


Scheme ABCB ADXD CECE XFXF
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 110010 111101 10101010 1111101 101010 110101 1010101 111101 011010 10101 0110010 111111 1111010 101010001 1111010 1111101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 455
Words 96
Sentences 9
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 88
Words per stanza (avg) 20

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about how we create our destiny's moment to moment

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Written on March 11, 2024

Submitted by robertl.92681 on March 11, 2024

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