Analysis of AS I AM

Barry Green Jr 1973 (Florida)



AS I AM

Here I am, Lord, take me as I am
Weak in flesh, but spiritually willing
Lost, alone I'm destined to be damned
Send me strength, Lord, in your healing

Once I wandered, so strong I thought
No power could rise against me
Through the battles I vainly fought
Battered and beaten pretending I was free

Look at me, my God! Oh how the mighty fell!
Here I stand, on legs battered and bruised
Broad is the highway leading to Hell
²But your Cross lifts those who freely choose

I wish I could say, that the giant I did slay
But I was small in the Land of giants
They only fell when I started to pray
On you, my Lord, alone am I reliant

I've learned my lessons on the shrapnel of pride
God, such a fool I've chosen to be
If I stand, may I stand at Your side
For those indeed are free, whom the Son sets free!

Here I am, Lord, take me as I am
Bind my wounded heart in love
Take me, all that I am, weak as I am
Lift me on eagles wings above

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Is Yours


Scheme a Abxb cdcd exex fxfx gdgd Ahah xIAxIAx
Poetic Form
Metre 111 111111111 10111000010 101110111 11110110 11101111 11011011 10101101 10010010111 11111110101 111111001 11011011 111111101 111111010111 1111001110 1101111011 11110111010 11110101011 110111011 111111111 11011110111 111111111 1110101 1111111111 11110101 1 1 1 1 1 1 11
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,006
Words 220
Sentences 14
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 7
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 92
Words per stanza (avg) 25

About this poem

Come to me, all you who are weary and burdened, and I will give you rest. Take my yoke upon you and learn from me, for I am gentle and humble in heart, and you will find rest for your souls. For my yoke is easy and my burden is light.” Matthew 11 28-30

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Written on March 14, 2024

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