Analysis of Mental Revolution (Spanglish version)



Revolución:
Los frutos de los estados indeseados
y nocivos mentales tal los excrementos estrechos.
Fundamentales son los elementos en un paisaje
del cambio de la esencia de los pensamientos.
Surtidos los efectos.
Cada etapa del proceso con valor y esfuerzo;
se te ensancha la pasión con cantazos en el pecho,
cada cual, exigiendo su derecho,
de lo justo y lo legítimo,
en contra de lo político:
Tarimas sin provecho.
Cortao el micrófono su corriente:
El destrono del poder despótico
tal atalayas de un abuso y su sombra
que un pueblo con bravura no lo encoje
porque se acoge
a una senda progresiva y democrática;
su mente inteligente,
que sin escollos cuando marcha, te recoge.

Illumination,
visions of the nations, together all linked:
The signs of a culmination.

Illumination,
visions of the nations, together all linked:
The signs of a culmination.

Echando suerte
por cada dominio convocados
a la cima reteniendo el poder,
equitativo:
Roles de los vivos,
tomando juramentos,
por cada gesto
con un aire que respira con los tonos de la gravedad.
Eternamente:
Por todos los cielos luces;
cántaros de una iris
con aletas que derraman oro,
la cual valoro;
lo que cesa en conferencia y celebración,
unidos todos, inquebrantable;
renta en cada boca que se halla tal cada compuerta,
donde lícito termina todo argumento:
Representa el orden con toda su autoridad,
evitando la violencia,
con la enseñanza de los rectos;
por encima lo que gime por debajo de la cordillera:
¡Polvo y ceniza se quita!

Illumination,
visions of the nations, together all linked:
The signs of a culmination.

Illumination,
visions of the nations, together all linked:
The signs of a culmination.

Illumination,
visions of the nations, together all linked:
The signs of a culmination.

Illumination,
visions of the nations, together all linked:
The signs of a culmination.

There was a newspaper named Stall,
that concealed what we write when we walk and fall.
Broken hips in a trip as we fell and slip
through a five-dollar-straw,
hacked and chopped just like drops of sweat
that collapse in a drip:
Shits, in a pile dumb collected too small,
dumped outside in a pond and a pit
to make time;
spent time and health for the wealth
in a shallow life;
and all oppression left behind.
Chambers carved by a slit,
near their ground  on their bodies
each creatures’ crawl in the great darkness
of dome nude, moonlit.
The thunder first heard in the storm;
mankind defined that the land might jut
in contempt back to the sea, drops of spit,
when madly galled, under shadows by death, no breath:
The great, brainless dip!

(Illumination,
visions of the nations, together all linked:
The signs of a culmination.)

(Illumination,
visions of the nations, together all linked:
The signs of a culmination.)


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Poetic Form
Metre 11 111111 1111111 1111111 11111111 111 10111011011 11111111111 101111 11101111 1101111 111 111111 111111 11111111 11101010111 111 01011111 111 1111111 0010 10101001011 0110010 0010 10101001011 0110010 11 11011 0110111 1 1111 11 1101 11111111111 1 11111 1111010 111110 111 11111111 111 101101011101101 111111 11111011 111 11110111 1111111111 11111 0010 10101001011 0110010 0010 10101001011 0110010 0010 10101001011 0110010 0010 10101001011 0110010 1101011 10111111101 10100111101 101101 10111111 101001 1001101011 111001001 111 1101101 00101 01010101 101101 1111110 110100110 1111 01011001 110110111 0011101111 11011011111 01101 0010 10101001011 0110010 0010 10101001011 0110010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 2,787
Words 546
Sentences 20
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 20, 3, 3, 22, 3, 3, 3, 3, 21, 3, 3
Lines Amount 87
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 199
Words per stanza (avg) 42

About this poem

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RzrgmJbqMzE Cultivate your mind.

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Written on March 16, 2024

Submitted by robertrad2021 on March 16, 2024

Modified by robertrad2021 on May 05, 2024

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