Analysis of Perfect Lies



Perfection is a lie and curse
We struggle with images we’ve cast
Only to live and die and die as we live.
I find myself asking a question.
Do we truly live as we strive for this lie?
Or, are we just biding time? Tick. Tock.

Humanity is flawed, perfection impossible.
An unobtainable goal is destined for failure
Yet, here I still find myself asking
What mask do I wear? What story do I tell?
What do YOU think as you read these words.


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Poetic Form
Metre 01010101 110110011 10110101111 11110010 11101111111 111110111 0100110100100 101001110110 11111110 11111110111 111111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 443
Words 93
Sentences 11
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 6, 5
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 169
Words per stanza (avg) 42

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The impossibility of perfection…

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Written on August 04, 2023

Submitted by heatherg.95197 on March 17, 2024

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