Analysis of Pebbles, Rocks and Mountains



Pebbles Rocks and Mountains

Pebbles Rocks and Mountains

Sometimes I feel like a pebble resting by the stream

extremely unique but one of billions it seems

My only purpose is waiting to be skipped lightly across the water

As a rock my travels carry me far being thrown across fields off bridges sometimes at stars

I view the world wide eyed risking being told Monumental lies

Living like the mountain not easily shaken

by insincere promises others may have broken

Thank you God for loving me so I continue to grow to know

I am strong like Everest/Kilimanjaro Whose body although bruised by the elements

still glows with beauty abound

Love joannie willlams


Scheme A A x x x x x b b x x x a
Poetic Form
Metre 101010 101010 0111101010101 010011111011 110101101111001010 10111010111010111100111 110111101010101 101010110010 101100101110 1111101110101111 111110000101101110100 1111001 111
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 671
Words 129
Sentences 1
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 42
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 42
Words per stanza (avg) 9

About this poem

Written after a 1998 incident.

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Written on October 17, 1998

Submitted by j128w2 on March 20, 2024

Modified by j128w2 on May 18, 2024

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