Analysis of Liquid Poison

Tonya Richardson 1968 (Mississippi)



In a weak moment you were there to comfort me, with you I was anyone I wanted to be.
You filled my head with lies and false hope, everyday with you was like walking a tightrope.
You made me believe that I could handle anything with you by my side, but in reality you were nothing more than an easy place to hide.
You set out to convince me that you were all that I needed, you weren’t going to give up until you succeeded. But I was much stronger than you had anticipated, I realized that I wasn’t really happy I was just intoxicated.
All you will ever bring me is eternal strife, so I no longer have a place for you in my life.


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Poetic Form
Metre 00110101110111111011011 11111101110111111001 111011111010111111010101011110111 1111011110111101110111011010111110111010011011110101110100 1111011101011111010111011
Characters 636
Words 130
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 5
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 98
Words per line (avg) 25
Letters per stanza (avg) 489
Words per stanza (avg) 126

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Written on January 08, 2024

Submitted by Athomentexas2002 on March 27, 2024

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Tonya Richardson

I’m a 54 year old married mother of 2 daughters. I suffer from severe anxiety and depression. Poetry is my way of coping. more…

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