Analysis of IN THIS/ IN HIM



IN THIS/IN HIM

Long nights, hot days
Changing life, new ways
Streets of sorrow and pain
In this, where's the gain?

Man was dead, our lives lost
Then went Jesus to the Cross
Whips and thorns, takes our pain
In Him, new life we all gain!

People pout, people cry
Never smile, then they die
Lives gone in a single hour
In this, where is Power?

Lonely men sat in the night
Guided as His Word they write
Bring God's Word for this Hour
In Him, see the Power!

People search, never find
Crying out, for a sign
Failing, and all is lost
In this, what's the cost?

Jesus searched, sheep He found
Lives He touched, turned around
And we gather those once lost
In Him, He's paid the cost!

Bombs, guns to destroy
Ending forever, people's joy
Death hides behind every face
In this, where is Grace?

Swords beaten into plowshare
Beauty found within a prayer
There we see God's Holy face
In Him, there is Grace!

Drums trump, marching beat
Soldier lags, sore feet
People cry,”raise our nation!”
In this where's Salvation ?

And we see, Satan's final defeat
Christ's victory, ours as sweet
Then, as one, bows every nation
In Him there's Salvation!

Children killed, every day
Not yet human, so they say
Souls lost, just can't cope
In this, where is hope?

Though in time, troubles come
Destruction is sought by some
Remember Jesus, and you'll cope
For in Him lies our hope
Amen


Scheme X AABB CXBB DDEE FFEE XXCG HHCG IIJJ XXJJ KKLL KKLL MMNN OONNX
Poetic Form Etheree  (34%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 0101 1111 10111 111001 01101 1111011 1110101 1011101 0111111 101101 101111 11001010 011110 1011001 1011111 1111110 011010 101101 101101 100111 01101 101111 111101 0110111 011101 11101 10010101 11011001 01111 110011 1010101 1111101 01111 11101 10111 1011010 011010 01111001 11001011 111110010 011010 1011001 1110111 11111 01111 101101 0101111 01010011 1011101 01
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,368
Words 273
Sentences 13
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 5
Lines Amount 50
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 80
Words per stanza (avg) 19

About this poem

I have told you these things, so that in me you may have peace. In this world you will have trouble. But take heart! I have overcome the world.” John 16:33

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Written on March 30, 2024

Submitted by crucifiedinhim2 on March 30, 2024

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