Analysis of Distant Hooves



America’s
faded glory
the polo field
reminds

Of years
of fleeting greatness
and hopes that lived
in kind

A child walks
the ball field
where ponies
used to tread

With memories
buried deep below
their grandeur
— all but dead

(The New Room: March, 2024)


Scheme XXAX XXXX XABC BXXC X
Poetic Form
Metre 0100 1010 0101 01 11 11010 0111 01 011 011 110 111 1100 10101 101 111 0111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 258
Words 49
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 12
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 40
Words per stanza (avg) 9
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on March 31, 2024

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