Analysis of 01/04/2024



today I saw you found someone else so I found a girl in a black dress and let her share my cigarette
I don't want to be someone you so easily forget but I fear you've already become one of my regrets
you made my mental health a mess and broke every promise you made in a easy breath
you tell me I'm the only one
but I know he's the one whose hands you'll let undress when he takes you to his bed


Scheme ABCDE
Poetic Form Tanka  (20%)
Cinquain  (20%)
Metre 011111111110100110101101 111111111000111110100111101 1111010101100101100101 11110101 1111011111011111111
Characters 395
Words 84
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 5
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 61
Words per line (avg) 17
Letters per stanza (avg) 307
Words per stanza (avg) 84
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Submitted by jaxonhurst on April 01, 2024

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