Analysis of Their Machines Must Be Better (Bussokusekika)

Edwin Tanguma 1966 (CA)



Their Machines Must Be Better   (Bussokusekika)

I think that i’ve learned
VA hospitals are rigged
My vitals were good
Another vet commented
That his blood pressure was low
Their machines must be better

Edwin Tanguma   Aka   Dagesh   4/8/2024


Scheme X XXXXXX X
Poetic Form
Metre 10111101 11111 11011 1101 0101100 1111011 1011110 10010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 245
Words 40
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 1
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 64
Words per stanza (avg) 15

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Written on April 09, 2024

Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on April 09, 2024

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