Analysis of A Candle in the Wind



Nothing gold stays too long.
Nature’s first green is gold.
She then transforms her form
as leaves subside to leaf.

When dawn gives way to day
a single leaf can flower
in this early morning hour,
a green and golden bower.

Your soft-scented candle,
drenched with fragrant whispers
caresses gentle hues
and hides my grief from view.

Dusk tarnishes all gold,
and leaves fall carelessly.
A candle in the wind –
you blew a while for me.                                                                                   


Scheme XAXX XBBB XXXX ACXC
Poetic Form Quatrain  (25%)
Metre 101111 101111 110101 110111 111111 0101110 01101010 0101010 111010 111010 010101 011111 1111 011100 010001 110111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 520
Words 89
Sentences 8
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 85
Words per stanza (avg) 19

About this poem

In memory of my wonderful husband who, like a candle, blew a while for me, his fragrance loving and protecting me. I still feel his presence as I can still smell the fragrance of the candle.

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Written on December 08, 2018

Submitted by susannaelliott on April 15, 2024

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Susanna Elliott-Newth

Susanna is a teacher, living near the coastal fringes of the Illawarra Coastline in NSW, Australia. Her environment is her stimulus for her writing. She has published four books of short stories, as well as her own memoir book, and writes educational resources for teachers. more…

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