Analysis of Under the right perception

Richard J Edwards 1960 (Ft Belvoir)



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Under the right perception

As the sunrises it's new and fresh rays of heat and light illuminate my imperfections and to balance the scale the things of value as well. Standing alone you may think it's just me and you'd be wrong. Maybe not in the picture at the moment but in my life is a woman that through her love pulls out the best in me and she won't settle for less. I benefit from love and life of which she cannot be anything but front and center for me. By her being there and wanting me the many layers of me are pinpointed into those of which can be a surprise but on a scale of Thankfulness I gaze into her eyes and I feel better than I thought ever possible. By the way she gives her best to me I could not be of sound heart to give her anything but the same.


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Characters 786
Words 159
Sentences 6
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 2, 1
Lines Amount 3
Letters per line (avg) 206
Words per line (avg) 52
Letters per stanza (avg) 309
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Written on April 16, 2024

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Richard J Edwards

Retired Navy. Live in Montana. And Love God. In 2004 I wrote and had published by poetry. Com The Truth Of Heart and Soul put in their book "Involving the Muse". This is not my best work. I have 40yrs of writings I know R publish worthy I'm just looking for some to help that knows how to do that. I'm a common man and I believe my writings R easily relatable. more…

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