Analysis of Waiting

William brooks 1959 (Salem)



I can see you even though your not here. Silent whisper that sounds so clear. The image of you seems to come to mind. I can picture it because you are so kind. As smelly as a rose on a moonlit night. Love in the air is the only sight. Your wonderful glow as it may stand. Really impresses me as a man. Just thinking of you gives me something to feel. A love deep down that is for real. No other love like one in the past. Surely this love is going to last. Lilly of the day and flower in my eye. Guess it's time for me to say goodbye. Diamonds and Pearls could not replace. Waiting to see your lovely face.


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Characters 606
Words 124
Sentences 16
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
Lines Amount 1
Letters per line (avg) 466
Words per line (avg) 124
Letters per stanza (avg) 466
Words per stanza (avg) 124

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Dedicated to one who deserves to be loved and cared for.

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Written on April 17, 2024

Submitted by Wbrooks431 on April 17, 2024

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