Analysis of Barriers



We interact with space in peculiar ways.
We run, dance and do somersaults when we play.
We can’t see the barriers
that divide our world,
but that’s not to say they’re not there.

The barrier of time is of our own making.
We place stress and expectations on ourselves.
We don’t think about reasons,
except when we fail.
Don’t we know pride leads to a fall?

The barrier of thought can affect our well-being.
A negative attitude can breed contempt.
We all want to be happy –
too often we’re not,
because of the way that we think!

The barrier of love can be a bridge to life.
If we open our hearts in a caring way
by giving to those in need -
our time and our love -
then the light in our hearts will shine.

The barrier of race is a race against time.
We choose to treat other people differently.
Just because their skin’s not white,
or were born elsewhere
does not give us this right of choice.

The barriers that deprive people of freedom
take away rights and responsibilities.
We lose all our confidence –
and much self-esteem,
that portray lives without purpose.

So, recognise barriers by knocking down walls
and valuing diversity and difference.
We all want to be happy
and live useful lives
and know in our hearts that we cared.


Scheme xaxxb cxxxx cxDxx xaxxx xdxbx xxexx xeDxx
Poetic Form Tetractys  (29%)
Metre 1011100101 1110110111 1110100 101101 11111111 0100111110110 11100101001 1110110 01111 11111101 01001110110110 0100101101 1111110 11001 01101111 010011110111 111010100101 1101101 1010101 101010111 010011101011 11111010100 1011111 1011 11111111 010010110110 1011000100 11110100 01101 10110110 1110011011 010001000100 1111110 01101 010101111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,252
Words 257
Sentences 19
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5
Lines Amount 35
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 137
Words per stanza (avg) 33

About this poem

This poem is self-explanatory. I try to live my life without barriers.

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Submitted by susannaelliott on April 17, 2024

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Susanna Elliott-Newth

Susanna is a teacher, living near the coastal fringes of the Illawarra Coastline in NSW, Australia. Her environment is her stimulus for her writing. She has published four books of short stories, as well as her own memoir book, and writes educational resources for teachers. more…

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