Analysis of UNLOCKING TRUST



The One-Somebody might be waiting for you somewhere. Satisfied, happy-sad moments await somewhere. Somewhere - you can know, because you can feel it - a strange-secret cogwheel is turning around your Life; a motionless glass ball in which you are also inside, not just a group of wretched minute-men ready to joke around.

Somewhere, the music of the squinting raindrops hits between the symmetries of your face, and the sure suspicion, like the heartbeat of a bud, feels the fulfillment of immortal romances in the body of the other. It is true that Time's deluge of executioner-smelling water has often unfairly swept you away and crushed you; in your clumsy, stumbling, hesitant movements, there was always the preordained useless impulse to defend yourself. The sign of Sagittarius is constantly evolving and changing - and yet Fate has never been kind to you.

It would be nice if someone else would pay attention to your water-sounding taps inside. Be careful not to swallow your shadow-self! Manipulations with a rat's appetite poison not only the wandering mind, but also the crypt-smelling struggles of everyday life. Nostalgia has been erected as protective walls around your shell-loneliness, so that the painful sting of useless life can never reach you again.

From your love - maybe - one day you will grow a rose tree that will grow abundantly; there are many tiny petals on it. Be careful! Don't let your life, which you said was just a pathetic playground, accompany you anymore! Every loss is a blind window, Be careful not to let absolute adults devour your childhood! Unexpectedly - it would be better - if someone finally looked at you, who knows your essence exactly and precisely without unnecessary words!


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Characters 1,729
Words 293
Sentences 15
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 4
Letters per line (avg) 347
Words per line (avg) 72
Letters per stanza (avg) 347
Words per stanza (avg) 72
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Written on April 19, 2024

Submitted by oasev on April 18, 2024

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Norbert Tasev

I was born on November 30, 1983 in Budapest! I studied Hungarian history. I was history teacher. I'm editing ebooks! So far, I have published my volumes on Smachwords and Publishdrive as part of an author's book publishing! more…

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