Analysis of When I was finally free!
Devon Bates 1980 (Norfolk)
I believe in creation right or wrong!
I believe in the good of today!
No man or woman wrote life's song!
I"ve crossed a few roads some of them were at least not cold!
Everything is as it should be!
I"ll let the seasons bend the wind!
The bunny rabbit also grabs it's carrots!
I"ll plant a new rose bush and seek jobs out!
Life may at times get hectic!
To write ones own show is to wake up and grow!
My dream woman and I were not fighting!
I prefer my tea hot, along with at times only my shadow to watch!
To clear my mind and to focus remains to perfect gifts!
My kids make me smile I'm persecuted I speak that truth out loud, so others will not settle for even the seconds!
Humans we all are diffrent unique!
Ah, that one single star!
Yet, even it gave us more than one planet!
No need for correction!
No flying like a bird my feet are not old!
Still if I fly again I'll invite my female best friend!
You live and you learn it is not right to take from others or to lie when their choice from yours was diffrent!
Martin Luther King Abraham Lincoln Harriet tubman
Nelson Mandela!
Jesus still believed if there was a God he cares for us!
America let us unite together and once again honestly stop Trumps negative energy!
Putin may suit the people he rules, yet I'd still rather
have Mr. and Ms. Robin hood and Mona Lisa on my guest list!
The facts speak the truth this nation was supposed to be built for me and you!
Diffrent races and creeds yet together we succeed!
A true leader calms tension and creates change!
Blessings and perfection!
Infinite remains creation!
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Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 1,592 |
Words | 335 |
Sentences | 33 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 32 |
Lines Amount | 32 |
Letters per line (avg) | 38 |
Words per line (avg) | 9 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 1,223 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 300 |
About this poem
A short poetical poem about how realizing to make a diffrence you must move on!
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Written on April 22, 2024
Submitted by devonb.14033 on April 22, 2024
Modified by devonb.14033 on April 22, 2024
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