Analysis of Lament of the Shadowed Heart



In the depths of a heart where shadows dwell,
Lies a story of fear and pain to tell.
A fortress once bright, now dimmed by years,
Its walls inscribed with silent tears.

The people I let in, with steps unsure,
Left their marks, their presence obscure.
Each footprint a stain, each memory a scar,
A tapestry of hurt, a singular memoir.

Losing love, a bitter, relentless ache,
A tempest of sorrow, a soul's earthquake.
Yet, in this abyss where light seldom parts,
A glimmer of hope ignites in the dark.

For though memories can wield a painful might,
They are treasures, precious and bright.
Each one a lesson, a moment's lease,
A fragment of time, a piece of peace.

So here in the dark, where my heart resides,
Amidst the fear, a small light abides.
A beacon of what was, what could be again,
A promise that love, in some form, remains.


Scheme AAXX BBCC DDXX EEFF GGXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (40%)
Etheree  (30%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 001101111 1010110111 010111111 11011101 0101101101 11111001 1101110001 01001101001 1010100101 010110011 1010111101 0101101001 11100110101 11101001 110100101 010110111 1100111101 010101101 01011111101 0101101101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 837
Words 175
Sentences 10
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 129
Words per stanza (avg) 30
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Written on April 23, 2024

Submitted by ChrisMorganroth on April 23, 2024

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Chris E Morganroth IV

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