Analysis of The river

Kelley Davies 1983 (Dallas)



Time sleeps in my absence

I am caught between banks of the river

I see stars, but no storms

I want out, not in

I see you there watching me

Judging where I am

I wish too that I wasn't this way

I will change for you, mother

I will be the change our family needs

I love you all so much

I can't continue to live this way

Maybe the earth can shatter and the light come through the cracks

I am here for you

I will always be there for you.


Scheme X A X X X X B A X X B X C C
Poetic Form
Metre 110110 1110111010 111111 11110 1111101 10111 111111011 1111110 11101101001 111111 110101111 10011100011101 11111 1111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 467
Words 114
Sentences 2
Stanzas 14
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 24
Words per stanza (avg) 7
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