Analysis of Because



You can take to me with lumps of wood
And I wouldn’t make a move to stop you.
You can hurl your anger and hit out
At me in any way you see fitting,
For I will stand and take it -
Because...

You can become annoyed with me for
Using my voice and pen power to speak words,
Words that must be said - that must be voiced,
That must be listened to and heeded to –
For I take this stand with you –
Because...

You can snigger, snarl or sneer at me,
But my resolve will stand firm in my cause
To help you see what you need in life,
And that’s not busy - it’s not doing more,
It’s not filling time with work –
Because...

You have no-one who can offer you
Such opportunities to self-reflect.
I charge in and barge in unwanted -
I know that. I make no apologies.
You became part of my life -
Because...

So, take the time to hear this advice.
Pay heed to your needs – not those of others.
Their burdens you carry like a weight
Waiting to weigh you down – imprisoning
Your emotions. Release them –
Because…

Because Susanna recognises your very special qualities.                                     


Scheme xaxbxC dxxaaC xxedxC axxfeC xxxbxC f
Poetic Form
Metre 111111111 011101111 111110011 1101011110 1111011 01 110101111 10110110111 111111111 1111010101 1111111 01 11111111 1101111011 111111101 0111011101 1110111 01 111111101 101001101 110010010 1111110100 1011111 01 110111101 1111111110 110110101 1011110100 1010011 01 01010111010100
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,112
Words 229
Sentences 13
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 1
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 132
Words per stanza (avg) 35

About this poem

Giving advice that had to be given.

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Submitted by susannaelliott on April 25, 2024

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Susanna Elliott-Newth

Susanna is a teacher, living near the coastal fringes of the Illawarra Coastline in NSW, Australia. Her environment is her stimulus for her writing. She has published four books of short stories, as well as her own memoir book, and writes educational resources for teachers. more…

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