Analysis of Pointless Whisper



I’m in pain
I’m hurting and you won’t help
I don’t ask, even for what I need
I look at you and try to plead

through my expression

But you don’t look or don’t care
These things begin to wear
Rough on my heart
Do you care?
No.
It’s my burden alone to bear
I will delete this before one of your eyes lies upon it
Another pointless whisper
Carried away by the wind  


Scheme XXAA X BBXBXBXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 101 1100111 111101111 11110111 11010 1111111 110111 1111 111 1 11100111 110110111111011 0101010 1001101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 383
Words 82
Sentences 3
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 1, 9
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 92
Words per stanza (avg) 25
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Written on March 27, 2024

Submitted by izabella.brand on April 25, 2024

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Izabella Brand

I am just a girl who loves to write. I believe there is beauty in focusing on individual words, rather than sentences. It makes you think about it more than maybe a book or short story would. Plus, there is much more symbolism in poetry, one line can be read 100 times and be understood differently each time. more…

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