Analysis of A Reflect at Midnight - What did I do wrong?



You graced my life
for a brief moment
like a dew drop landing on a leaf,
before sliding off
into oblivion.

Your residue,
that soft fragment of connection,
remained like a sinew-thin moon outline,
etched across a darkening sky,
until morning’s light took you away.

With the passing of time
comes the dawning of sadness
that persists in the memory of time shared,
but now too is lost in life’s annals,
never to flow my way again.

Life’s currents
spark brief interludes of hope,
but which fade too,
too quickly,
into the stream of ether
as thought’s molecules absorb all traces,
leaving nothing.


Scheme XXXXA BAXXX XXXXX XXBXXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 10110 101110101 01101 010100 110 11101010 01101111 10101001 011011101 101011 1010110 10100100111 111110110 10111101 110 111011 1111 110 0101110 111001110 1010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 603
Words 120
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 7
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 118
Words per stanza (avg) 26

About this poem

My friend came, shared time and wine and then left.

Font size:
 

Submitted by susannaelliott on April 26, 2024

36 sec read
3

Susanna Elliott-Newth

Susanna is a teacher, living near the coastal fringes of the Illawarra Coastline in NSW, Australia. Her environment is her stimulus for her writing. She has published four books of short stories, as well as her own memoir book, and writes educational resources for teachers. more…

All Susanna Elliott-Newth poems | Susanna Elliott-Newth Books

12 fans

Discuss this Susanna Elliott-Newth poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "A Reflect at Midnight - What did I do wrong?" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 29 May 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/186068/a-reflect-at-midnight---what-did-i-do-wrong%3F>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    May 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    2
    days
    15
    hours
    27
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    Which of these poets was not American?
    A Rudyard Kipling
    B Emily Dickinson
    C Walt Whitman
    D Ezra Pound