Analysis of Dark

Ram Thakkar 2003 (vadodara)



Life's dark
Life's a joke

Disclaimer:
Don't read me, I'm depressed
Will make you too

Life's a piece of shit
Sorry I failed
Sorry mom, your son failed,

I want to commit suicide
someone give me cyanide
Oh! this shitty website! yo!

To be a writer, you've to be a joker
easy money, get some poker,
she sells snakes, earthworm bolkar

yes I'm dissing life
"Am I a failure?" is all I think
yes I'm dissing life

yes get it laid, get it railed
Mike Pompeo, Cyrus break
Hudsun river, carthy scraigh


Scheme xx axx xbb ccx aaa DxD bxd
Poetic Form Tetractys  (35%)
Etheree  (25%)
Metre 11 101 010 111101 1111 10111 1011 101111 1110110 11110 11111 11010111010 10101110 11111 11101 110101111 11101 1111111 1100101 11011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 501
Words 105
Sentences 5
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 2, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 53
Words per stanza (avg) 13
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Written on May 06, 2024

Submitted by ramt.51148 on May 05, 2024

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