Analysis of When you passed by on that day



Gleam of your istanbul eyes

Is beautiful like a sunrise

In the dark and in the noon

You are beautiful like a moon

You glow in that facebook pic

Like a flame on a candle wick

As you shine there like a pearl

Seeing you girl, emotions whirl

When you passed by on that day

Sunflowers turned your way

It was jealous sun’s eyesore

As those flowers loved you more

Butterflies to each other said

, “Oh leave these flowers dead

Wish to bath in fragrance here

There is walking, a flower there”

My poems, girl, make you shy

Blushing then you tell me bye

Unsaid words will make me die

Why I ask this torture why


Scheme A A B B C C D D E E F F G G X X H H H H
Poetic Form Etheree  (25%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 111011 1100101 0010001 11100101 110111 10110101 1111101 10110101 1111111 10111 111011 1110111 1011101 111101 1110101 11100101 1101111 1011111 0111111 1111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 627
Words 137
Sentences 1
Stanzas 20
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 24
Words per stanza (avg) 6

About this poem

The poem takes some pictures of the spring buds of love in my heart

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Written on September 08, 2015

Submitted by junaidashraf2025 on April 12, 2024

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Junaid Ashraf

Junaid Ashraf teaches poetry novel and filmmaking at an MNC and has a wide experience in sports journalism as writer and a webstories editor. Having written three books, he has done his post-graduate studies in economics and English literature. He has written opinion pieces, fiction and poetry for various newspapers and literary magazines. Research, writing poetry and fiction are his main interests. Besides that, he is a sports enthusiast and likes playing football, cricket and skiing. more…

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