Analysis of When Winchester races

Jane Austen 1775 (Steventon Rectory, Hampshire) – 1817 (Winchester, Hampshire)



When Winchester races first took their beginning
It is said the good people forgot their old Saint
Not applying at all for the leave of Saint Swithin
And that William of Wykeham's approval was faint.

The races however were fixed and determined
The company came and the Weather was charming
The Lords and the Ladies were satine'd and ermined
And nobody saw any future alarming.--

But when the old Saint was informed of these doings
He made but one Spring from his Shrine to the Roof
Of the Palace which now lies so sadly in ruins
And then he addressed them all standing aloof.

'Oh! subjects rebellious! Oh Venta depraved
When once we are buried you think we are gone
But behold me immortal! By vice you're enslaved
You have sinned and must suffer, ten farther he said

These races and revels and dissolute measures
With which you're debasing a neighboring Plain
Let them stand--You shall meet with your curse in your pleasures
Set off for your course, I'll pursue with my rain.

Ye cannot but know my command o'er July
Henceforward I'll triumph in shewing my powers
Shift your race as you will it shall never be dry
The curse upon Venta is July in showers--'.


Scheme ABCB XABA XDXD ECEX FCFC GFGF
Poetic Form Quatrain  (83%)
Metre 11010111010 111011001111 101011101111 01101101011 01010010010 010010010110 0100100101 0111010010 110111011110 11111111101 1010111110010 01101111001 1100101101 11111011111 101101011101 111011011011 1100100110 11101001001 1111111110110 11111101111 11011101101 111001110 111111111011 0101111010
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,146
Words 210
Sentences 9
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 39
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 154
Words per stanza (avg) 35
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jane Austen

Jane Austen was an English novelist whose works of romantic fiction, set among the landed gentry, earned her a place as one of the most widely read writers in English literature. more…

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