Analysis of Song of the Driftweed

Jessie Mackay 1864 (Rakaia Gorge) – 1938 (Christchurch)



HERE’S to the home that was never, never ours!   
Toast it full and fairly when the winter lowers.   
Speak ye low, my merry men, sitting at your ease;   
Harken to the homeless Drift in the roaring seas!   

Here’s to the life we shall never live on earth!         
Cut for us awry, awry ages ere the birth.   
Set the teeth and meet it well, wind upon the shore;   
Like a lion, in the face look the Nevermore!   

Here’s to the love we were never let to win!   
What of that? a many shells have a pearl within;           
Some are mated with the gold in the light of day;   
Some are buried fathoms deep, in the seas away.   

Here’s to the selves we shall never, never be!   
We’re the drift of the world and the tangle of the sea.   
It’s far beyond the Pleiad, it’s out beyond the sun           
Where the rootless shall be rooted when the wander-year is done!


Scheme AABB CCDD EEFF GGHH
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 110111101010 111010101010 111110110111 101010100101 11011110111 111010110101 101011110101 10100011010 11011010111 111010110101 111010100111 111010100101 11011110101 0011010010101 1101010110101 101011101010111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 876
Words 160
Sentences 13
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 152
Words per stanza (avg) 40
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jessie Mackay

Jessie Mackay (1864 in Rakaia Gorge – 23 August 1938, in Christchurch) was a New Zealand poet and animal rights activist. more…

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